Interesting text at start...would be better with small photos of students in need next to them. Images well timed and fit with narration. You let the stumbles in, and it would be better with those edited out. Images stop before narration. This needs to be fixed by adding another image...and the stumbles in the narration should be fixed for a higher grade.
Interesting text at start...would be better with small photos of students in need next to them. Images well timed and fit with narration. You let the stumbles in, and it would be better with those edited out. Images stop before narration. This needs to be fixed by adding another image...and the stumbles in the narration should be fixed for a higher grade.
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